vox nihili

I'm not against short poems, but this one seems a little jumpy, like a few pieces are missing. Post some more of it, since you have it. I love these ...

Thanks. The title I came up with before I realized that the terrible prompts contest required that heading was Revelation of the Roses. I need some help with poem-punctuation! I ...

A very original plot. I've never heard of an apocalypse-war story narrated with such tantalizing fore-shadowing. You've got a great beginning, however, you've got a few problems with the tenses ...

Really good drawing! It makes the viewer wonder: who is this woman in the long dress? She has this interesting expression with a good angle on her face, too. What ...

Wow. You've got a real eye for detail. I love to draw, but I wouldn't be able to do this in..a gazillion years. All those creatures, ooh, that spider with ...

Thanks for the critique. I'm going to work on the whole "how his father died," thing.

I've never read anything about vampires before, but, I've got to say, I'm hooked on this one. It's kind of confusing, reading the part about Xandra being Hanna. How old ...

*Note, this is just the first third or so... Also, please tell me if the guy's thoughts and sort of emotional view is accurate..I've never written a story with a ...

Thankyou for the warning. I'm sorry you went through that...but i think it's a good thing you posted this. For all of us who are naive.

Wow. Lucky, though, that you didn't get in trouble. If I'd done that, I'd have been in BIG trouble. But then I wouldn't have been able to throw a bucket... ...

Pretty funny. Reminds me of a shoe-tying prank my class pulled on our student teacher. lol. I didn't find much wrong other than this: "only to return a few minutes ...

Pretty creative. It sounds like something a schizophrenic would write, especially with the sense of outside powers...creepy! It seems kind of different. Do you mean jackals, like the half-dog looking ...

Wow! The end really takes the reader by surprise. I love the combination of vocabulary. Keep writing. It can get a little confusing in the middle what with all the ...

It's kind of creepy-i wrote a poem a little bit similar to this one about three months ago. I like the train-of-thought- thing. It's....pensive. (thoughtful) You could call it "To ...

Oooh. Chilling. It's one of the few poems on here that, sequentially-makes sense! (just talking about the poems on this site in gerneral. i don't think i've read anything of ...